At peace at last.
At peace at last
A Story by Coyote Poetry
A story for a good friend. Soldiers need to remember the old timers who taught us respect and how to lead.
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At peace at last
The Soldiers gave him a 21 gun salute.
Only young and old Soldiers came to say goodbye.
Old Sergeant Major finally drank himself to death.
Thirty five years being a Soldier left him waiting for death to come.
I met him an early morning walking into the base.
He told me they take your license away with 5 DWI’s.
I told him I come this way everyday from my girlfriend.
I would be honored to pick him up.
He told me “You are alright with me Sergeant C
I will meet you at the gate.”
I answer no problem Sergeant Major.
He laughed.
Told me to call him Paul in private.
He slapped my back and smiled.
“I will call you John, my friend.”
He got demoted to my company.
He told me in private.
“I’m glad the Army kept me around.
I have no place to go.”
He was my First Sergeant now.
At the company picnic.
We partnered up and kick everyone ass in horse shoes.
We sat and talks with me.
He told me. ” I will be dead soon.
What will be left of me?
Will you remember me Sergeant C? “
I wrapped my arm around him.
I told him ” You were with my father on the boat to Korea.
Us young Soldiers need to take care of the old one.”
He smiled.
A young Soldier was going to lose everything.
First Sergeant asked what do you need?
The young Soldier told him too damn much.
He looked at me.
Handed me his checkbook.
Told me take him home and pay all his bills.
He told me write his name for him on the checks.
Add it up right.
He has close to $30, 000 in a checking account.
I paid the debts of the Soldiers.
The Soldier and the wife were very thankful.
I asked them never to say a word.
First Sergeant wants this to be private.
I drove him home now.
He was looking bad now.
The whiskey and beer would kill him soon.
I asked him to quit drinking for a while.
He looked to the ocean in our view.
He tells me.
“Drinking blind me from the shit I have seen.
Wasn’t for you shit head Soldiers.
I would have no purpose.”
He drank at the bar around the corner from his small apartment.
I started to meet him there.
He had many friends.
Old Timers who had retire.
He loved to sing Hank William, Jr.
Karaoke was his favorite.
It was funny to see this 6 foot 4 inch man
sing and dance to the old music.
I would drink slow to make sure he would get home.
He told me in my truck.
“I’m being booted out.
Doctors told me liver and kidney are gone.
I reached my goal.
I will join my friends soon.
I drank myself to death.”
He gave me a big Texas smile.
“Don’t worry John.
I will save you a seat.
Soldiers must take care of Soldiers.”
I became good friends with him.
We drank together till one day he told me.
“I can’t walk anymore.
Need a Soldier to do his duty.
Take care of an old Soldier.”
I asked what did you need?
He smiled.
Told me.
“Bring me cold beer and whiskey to my home.
Don’t ever pity me.
Soldier must die.
Some are lucky.
They died on the battlefield.”
I sat with many old timers.
They came by to show respect.
We drank and laugh by the Sergeant Major bed.
He was content to be with Soldiers.
I got a call at work.
Old Sergeant Major was dead.
He left a note.
Sergeant C. will take care of my last desires in my Will.
He left me a letter with a thousand dollars.
“This is for your inconvenience.
My Will is simple.
Half my money to the Old Soldier home.
The other half to Red Cross.”
At least 200 Soldier stood shoulder to shoulder.
Most of us were crying when Taps was played.
I smiled and thought what would the old Sergeant Major say.
He would tell us.
Be good Soldiers.
Take care of each other in War and peace.
Coyote
22 January 2010
Most stirring, John. We need to remember those brave soldiers who serve and have served in our armed forces.
The old Soldiers set the example for the young Soldiers. Thank you for the comment.
Amazing blog and thanks for following my Blog!
Thank you for the comment.
No problem mate
I nominated you for the Liebster Award in my post you liked – http://sophiasvoice.com/2013/01/02/liebster-blog-award/
Your work touches many.
Thank you for the nomination. I do appreciate. Thank you for stopping by.
hello I’ve nominated you for blog of the year here is the detail http://taraleeblog.wordpress.com/2012/12/30/blog-of-the-year/
Thank you for the nomination. I do appreciate the nomination.
you’re welcome
Very touching and very good. The struggles veterans go through are sad, concerning and recurring. Thanks
Thank you for the comment. The old timers in the military show us the way to be leaders and enjoy being alive.
May the world never leave your rich gift with a pen. Thank you!
Thank you Harold Green for the kind words. I do appreciate. Must remember old friends and teachers.
You are such a good man and a good friend and a good soldier. I know you’ve been to my blog today. I was going to leave you a message that I was giving you the Shine On Award. You deserve to have the night stars shine down upon you. I was also going to wish you a Happy New Year 2013 and hope that all your wishes and dreams are fulfilled. That we would all feel Love and Joy and Happiness and Bliss. Well I wish this all for you. And I do award you the “Shine On” Award. You can post it if you want. I will leave you name and link on the list of nominees so that you may get more people to see the words you create into such special meanings. You take care. Lot of Love. jk Jennifer ps. it was good of you to be there for all the people you care about. It definitely helps them through.
Thank you Jennifer for the kind comment. I appreciate the nomination. Happy New years back to you. Be safe and have fun.
I hope your New Year started out well. It will be a year for growth and change and also fun for I HOPE all of us. Thank you John, love, jennifer
Happy New Year John!
Thank you for stopping by and have a Happy New Year.
There is an Online Christmas Party at Marsha Lee’s Blog! Celebrating my birthday and Christmas! Feel free to stop by and celebrate! http://tchistorygal.wordpress.com/2012/12/24/renees-online-birthday-party/
Merry Christmas!
Renee
Great words man
Thank you for the comment. You are very kind.
It touched my heart. Lovely story of the real soldiers. It is so hard to stop tears.
Thank You
Merry Christmas and Happy New Year
I have a Star over here for your blog
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Eunice
Wow-very powerful! You transported me & showed me another side of life! Will look forward to following you future blogs.
Thank you for the comment. I appreciate you stopping by.
I spent 24 years in the Army. Did my bit, Shot once in DS1 Here is my not to war. Its called.
My Old Friend War, Piece of Meat
A rugged piece of meat
Tempered and tone
Wears my uniform
Carries my weapon
It follows my command
Even calls out in my voice
But it is not me
That old piece of meat
Will keep on trying
Keep on walking
Bathed in sweat and grime
With blood on its boots
But not me.
I’m back home in my garage
Making a wooden box
To keep my things in.
A good poem. I was lucky. My leaders in 1976 were Vietnam and Korea vets. Taught me well. The old soldiers like the drink. I drank heavy till 1996. A good woman told me the door or the booze. I choose the woman. Thank you for the comment.
Your poetry has brought tears to my eyes. Thank you for sharing your gift with the world!
Thank you for the comment. This man was a Soldier who survived two major wars. Never complain. He held hope and confident in the skill and leadership of men. I appreciate your kind words.
Well I am glad to give the kind words I have. I pictured exactly what you just explained back to me. That’s great that you were able to explain that through your poetry in such a way…wonderful!
You’re work is beautiful.
John, thank you for a tribute beautifully written.
Thank you form the comment. We need to remember old friends.
There are no real enemies. Just a purpose. Respect.
I can read this poetry 4th time too, straight in a row but It just struck me I can revisit and I am too overwhelmed for another go. Cheers John.
Real life make us think. Like in your poetry. Real people come alive in your words and we need to keep them alive with story and poetry. Thank you for reading.
That’s a convinction enough to keep writing, a duty as writers we owe to real beautiful souls and readers too. I am a fan of your writing John. Following you, Mate !
You are right. I write about a kind woman. Rachel Corrie. I do it one time a year. She was a life shield killed in the Middle East in 2004. A Poet from the Middle East called her the beautiful America. Good and bad must be kept alive. I hope you keep writing. I feel in your story. A life filled with many journeys to be told.
You got that story here?. Anyway, I have plans to chew on each word written by you, probably twice in next 7 days
John you have so many responses, I wonder how you can read them all. I am big on long texts but this one grabbed me and did not let go. Thank you , this is fine tribute.
heart
Thank you for the comments. I appreciate.
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Coming from “once” a soldier, married to a soldier and having grandparents that were soldiers – this is Wonderful! Thank you for bringing me to tears as I envisioned these two comrades! Hope u don’t mind if I share it!
I met many good people in mt 15 years in the Army. Taught me to appreciate life and take care of the people you work with. Thank you for the comment.
Touching, Coyote. More than touching.
Respect and leadership are what make a man. Strong leaders in the military had led young men to better roads and decisions. Thank you for the comment.
True. We had respect and leadership back then. It’s gone out the window with the bathwater. I’m afraid we as a nation are on a journey full of perils so all we can do is try to make others smile once in a while. I’ll be back to visit your blog, it’s keeper, and thanks for the overwhelming support on mine. We’ll talk again.
I have studied and always loved poetry, and yours is amazing–it is rare that I come across writing that I love this much in the blogosphere. Thank you for sharing your gift, and your life experience, with the world!
Thank you for the kind words. My goal is to tell story and I work on a few sites trying to motivate the new writer’s. Need more people who read and write with skill. Maybe the world could be a better place.
John,
Thanks for checking out the posts on my yoga blog. You have a lot of heart and it is heartening to see that you are on a journey of processing and speaking out about your experience with war. We need your voice. Keep writing and keep your heart open. Namaste.
Thank you for the comment. Easy to write with separation. I always wrote poetry. Now for 40 years now.. Need people to write down their life for their family to understand their life. I found a book my Grandmother wrote notes for 70 years. My mother thought my Grandmother hated her. In this book. She wrote her daughter was the only one who stood with her entire life in this journal. brought happiness to my mother after my grandmother death.
What a gift!!
This man in the story taught me lead by example. He never said a negative word. A man with a smile and how can I help you are the people that mold the future. Thank you for the comment.
John, you are an incredibly strong, thoughtful poet. I cried listening to Taps at my father’s funeral this past year, too; it was powerful to me to see the line of soldiers who came out to honor my dad, even though they never knew him. Thank you for sharing your art on this blog, and for following mine (orange marmalade)
Very Moving, I really enjoyed this. My father was a vet. and this makes me think of him. Thanks for stopping by and following my blog.
Thank you for the comment. Soldiers seem to think alike on some things. Thank you for stopping by and reading.
This is particularly evocative for Armistice Day, tomorrow, we remember them all …
We need to remember the Soldiers fighting today and yesterday. I appreciate the comment.
The old soldier watched as soldiers carried him to the grave,
With honor and respect they lowered him into the ground,
His spirit saluted them as they said their last amens,
“Come join me at the bar tonight, I’ll buy the next round,”
His friends gathered for one last toast,
To celebrate the life of this gallant friend,
There were no tears, every eye was dry,
For they knew their memories would never end,
Somewhere above the old soldier laughed,
As the soldiers each raised a glass,
“Here’s to the man who taught us well,
what it means to really have class.
Every year on Veterans Day we’ll march,
Honoring those who’ve followed the soldiers creed,
As we take each step we’ll salute the vets,
With ‘Old Sargent’ proudly in the lead.”
Remembering those who have gone before.
i got shivers at the end of this ~ you are still showing him respect and keeping his memory alive. well done!
We must keep our elders and good friends alive. In memory and on paper. Thank you for reading and your comment.
I can understand this. I lost my parents recently and know the feeling.
Always hard to lose family and friends. We need to remember them with words and in memory. Thank you for the comment.
I felt your heart in this. Very moving. And I loved the tone.
Thank you for reading and your comment. I do appreciate.
You have such amazing stories about the people you meet
Because of your poem, he is immortalized. Thank-you.
This is a very moving tribute. Beautiful.
Thank you. We can’t forget the good people who were part of a life.
Such a touching poem. I can only imagine the burden soldiers of war carry throughout their lives. Your service and sacrifices are greatly appreciated.
I enjoyed being a Soldier. Create good friendship and good memories. Today is hard. Soldiers are learning hardship and death. I pray for peace. Thank you for the comment.
this was so very beautiful! extremely sad but so straight from your very soul!
True stories allow us to remember good people and show the world. Good men had lived once. A writer need to keep the memory of people we cared for alive in heart and memory. Thank you for the comment.
A remarkable story remarkably told. You write with intensity and importance. I’m also from Michigan.
I ended up 20 miles from where I was born. I travel the world and I missed the four seasons of Michigan. Thank you for the comment.
Thanks for following us! We’re from Michigan too and living in England now. Namaste.
Thank you John. My father was a pilot in WW2, my mother a nurse. And my older brother a medic in Vietnam. My father never talked about the war, my brother seldom. But it was obvious how much was carried, how much needed to be processed and if hopefully released. And if not released, at least not allowed to ruin you. Your writings are words of release and recognition, of self respect and a willingness to talk about and engage a different battle. Much respect to you.
I was lucky. I was trained by the Vietnam Vet’s. The Soldiers in the old days and today. Hold a common bond. I wish war would end. Young men and woman should be learning love and learning life. Not war. Thank you for the comment. I do appreciate.
My father was a POW in Korea for 2 years and 6 days…My eldest son is now a US Marine…Your poem touched me to my core. Thank you so much for not only this but all of your poems and your service to our country! You are remarkable…
Thank you for comment. My father served in the Korea war and Vietnam. Made him a fear man. He was a good father to me. Your family have given a lot. We who know the cost of freedom. Need to insure we do not lose it.
As was my dad, I miss him everyday. I miss my son too, as much as I honor and respect them, I wish he’d never gone…that’s just because I’m his momma
They are definitely under paid, under appreciated and then under cared for when they come home but God Bless them all, past, present and future!
Beautiful, brought tears to my eyes. Thank you so much, for sharing such a strong n heartfelt. story
I feel like, I need a drink, lol
Thank you for looking in at EoTE. I like the feel of your blogsite – spacious and full of genuine thought, not cluttered at all.
A touching story well told. My father was on the first wave of the Normandy landings in France in WW2 He was Royal Signals. He survived some terrible experiences of blood and death which he only talked about just before his death at 89 years old.
We must remember the good man who fought for freedom. Freedom for the USA and world was costly. My stepfather was a paratrooper in WW2. He never speak of his time in the war. Thank you for the comment.
I could not stop reading your words, beautifully written and now…I’m going back up to read again.
Very touching. Beautiful writing.
Deeply touching, Coyote. My dad was KIA WWII…pilot of a B-24. I never knew him. I often wonder which is worse in those situations–dying or remembering. The rest of his crew survived, were taken POW and many had issues (breakdowns, addictions) throughout their lives. Wonderful post for a hero.
I’m sorry for the loss of your father. WW2 took many good men. His crew had to live with bad memories. Some memories are hard to forget. Thank you for reading and the comment. I appreciate.
beautiful poem… i just nominated you for the ‘family of Bloggers award’.. enjoy
Thank you for the nomination. I do appreciate. Thank you for reading my story of a good friend.
John I served with some amazing guys who shouldered so much. Stories buried of lives, lost friends buried, burdens carried… You do the story of the old forgotten soldier justice – thank you!!!
Thank you for the comment. Some people leave you with real wisdom. Hard to rate another life unless you walked in their shoes.
Deeply powerful. Thanks for sharing. XO
I have read some of your work… I am overwhelmed by the stories you have and the experiences you have gained… I am a fan
You are very kind. I have been writing for a long time. I hope I can some good stories and poetry. I believe it is the responsibilities of writers. To write the truth and be unafraid of the responses. Most of the great writers were not like by their world. Thank you for writers like Hemingway and Kosinski. Show us the real world through real story and their experiences. Thank you for the comment.
the soldiers’ past always comes to haunt them..and they have to fight and live in a nightmare to protect our freedom..It is the same in all countries, isn’t it? Thank you for sharing!
War leave permanent wounds everywhere. I remember being station in Germany. I saw men (WW2 vets) with permanents wounds asking for donations. I gave to them. War is costly in life and for the country. Thank you for reading.
Hello John. My husband is retired from the Air Force. I plan on reading this to him. I know he will appreciate it. There is much to learn from those who have served. It is important to show respect and ensure dignity. Thank-you, for stopping by my site. I’m very pleased to meet you.
We can’t forget the teachers of young Soldiers. We need examples and in the military. Soldier assist soldiers. Thank you for the comment.
moved to tears. Respect to you and the old solider.
The Sergeant Major chose his path. He never wanted pity. Wanted his Soldiers to be leaders and good men. Thank you for the comment.
Soldiers!!
Exemplary and often extremely interesting their tales are!
What a beautiful friendship you had with him; you honored him and it was repaid to you many times over. (even though you weren’t looking for anything) Thanks for sharing!
Thank you for the comment. The military is good for young men with little direction. Old Soldiers will teach and lead you to the right path. The Veterans who taught us how to be Soldiers were the men of honor.
A soldier is always a soldier.
Your words are true. Thank you for the comment.
lovely and intense story of the real soldiers…
Beautiful
Thank you for the comment. A old memory that must be remember. A writer’s job is to keep alive the real hero’s in our life.
That is wonderful, and you have done it so beautifully !
Greetings Shari
Do you know how hard it is for me not to cry right now, there is a massive throng of Israeli soldiers around me . Very powerfu.
Only Soldiers understand Soldiers. Soldier’s must do terrible things. Protecting freedom and following orders take you to bad places. Only old timers will talk quietly about in lonely bars and taverns. I appreciate your comment. I worked with the Israel Army a few times. I did a lot of time in the Middle East. The Israel Soldiers were well trained and educated.
So often I hear that fear is the wound carried by those with combat experience, but more often, it’s the terrible things asked that have the greater mark. Thank you — your story paints an image that sometimes is missed.
soldiers of life