I can show you God
I can show you God
A Poem by Coyote Poetry
Just thoughts and things to ponder on
I knew a woman from Santa Cruz. We sat together often drinking hot and tasty
coffee on the Santa Cruz boardwalk. Her heart was cold and dead.She told me God is dead and forgotten.
We are just people struggling with no place to go or reasons to be alive.
I smiled and pointed to the sea.
I told her God is alive.
Look at the dancing sea.
The sun above us. Gifts for us from God.
God isn’t our master or guide.
Life is for us to decide.
She looked frustrated and asked.
Don’t God support to protect and save us?
Look at this world. War, murder, violence and dead-ends.”
I requested her to travel with me.
I told her. “I will show you God and you can talk to him
one on one.”
She told me. ” My Dark Poet friend who write of war and death.
Describe love and passion with detail and sadness. What have God
done for you?”
I took her hands and whispered. He had saved me many times. He led
me to safety from dangerous places and situations. He awoke me to
skip death and maybe I can give someone hope.”
We drove in-land to the California fault line. Took three hours to
reach the fault lines. This was the dream land for the free climbers
of unknown and unmarked areas. There was only a warning sign.
“Caution free flowing rocks”
She open my journal and she read a poem aloud.
“The places of peace
Ancient places and secrets hidden.
We allowed ghostly views of life and death.
I search for beauty hidden from the normal eyes.
Rare places to find peace.
I find cliffs to sit with Eagles.
I talk with the Gods of the wind and water.
I touch the soil and feel the energy and life.
The ancient Gods are fair.
They do not disturb or change our journey.
They just whisper. Life is fair.
Take what you need. Don’t abuse the land.
Love and respect your neighbors.
I sit with God on a cliffs.
I see the sky and the sun.
I have no prisons holding me in.
I thanks the Gods for opportunity and chance.”
She walked in silence.
We walked for one hour. I took her to my hidden waterfall.
She could not believe the strength of the water and the beauty
of the location. Wildflowers grew everywhere and I saw her smile.
I told her. “This is one of many gifts from God.
God is generous to the people who cherish beauty and life.
She stripped down and she went to the water ,
allowed the water to clean her heart and soul.
She asked me to join her. I told her. “This is your time. ”
The sun is falling into the west. I told her we must leave. I have one more
place to show you. She take my hand and we walked to the hidden cliff.
There are seats of stone for us to sit. I told her to sit down. I have friends to show you.
I open up my power bag. I take out some tied-up sage.
I light the sage. I walk in circles and thank the spirits for the good day.
I request forgiveness for coming to their ancient place of prayers.
I pray for my friend to find peace.
I go to my friend. I bring her up. I take her to the edge of the cliff.
She is amazed. Two hawks are flying near. She can see forever. Tears
appear in her eyes. She asked. “Are we trick into believing in the wrong things?
Do we blind ourselves from the real beauty. Do we waste time and life on
useless things?”
I brought her close and told her. Nature is a fine example. The hawk need little. Takes
what they need. Don’t kill for useless reason and love the free sky and open land.
Would be nice if man would be kinder? I told you I would show you God.
God is in you. In the deeds you do and life you live. Look at this place
It was create by a artist. God gave us free-will and chance.”
We stand together in silence watching the Hawks survey the land.
My friend turn to me and smiled. Told me. “Johnnie you are right. God is here.
I want to sit alone and think.”
I left her with the ancient spirits. I left her for one hour. Darkness was coming.
We had a silence walk to the truck.
She turned to me. Kissed my face cheeks and told me.
“You are right kind Poet. God is for us to find. Thank you for sharing time
with me my friend.”
Coyote
She told me. ” My Dark Poet friend who write of war and death.
Describe love and passion with detail and sadness. What have God
done for you?”
tHIS pOST IS bRILLIANT.
tHANK yOU!
Yeah, My All-Caps Key has a mind of its OWn–Go Figger!
ChErES And CherioS
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Hello Lance. Thank you for stopping by. I do appreciate.
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What beautiful poetry here, John. I just came across this – God is generous with those who love nature and beauty and sits with them on clifftops.
Best wishes for the New Year – shobana
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Since I found got again, peace has come over me. It gave my life purpose.
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This is very good. We must believe in something and know. We don’t walk alone.
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If God is dead is us who turned blind due to trauma.
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This was written by another blogger and I found it very thought-provoking. I hope you enjoy.
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Thank you for the reblogged.
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Hi, beautiful poem, I love this line – ‘ Do we blind ourselves from the real beauty. Do we waste time and life on useless things? so true we can find the amazing each day just sometimes we have to look that little bit harder, thanks for sharing 🙂
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Most people are blind to the gifts of God. A blooming flower, a tasty apple. Should show us. Life can be okay. Thank you for reading and the comment.
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Beautiful post ❤
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Thank you dear Saania. If we see the beauty of our world. We can see god.
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Indeed 🙂
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Very thought-provoking. Wonderful story.
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Thank you, Sam. We are surrounded by miracles if we look.
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Awsome very good I walk the same path as nature it is the only true GOD and GODDESS it is in its purest form.
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I agree James. If we open our eyes. The gifts are everywhere. Where I live. A family of hawks are near. When I see them in the sky. It is a miracle.
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Beautiful. 💖 Happy to meet you. 🌷
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Glad to meet you too and thank you for reading. If we open our eyes. We can find beautiful places to know peace.
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That we can! 🌷
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Deep one John. Thoroughly enjoyed this one.
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One of my old poems. In Nature. The beauty of God, can be seen and touched. Thank you my friend for reading and the comment.
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Reblogged this on How my heart speaks and commented:
A very beautiful piece written by John Coyote
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Thank you Katherine. God is, all around us. Thank you for the reblogged.
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I am so glad I found you,John.You are so full of feeling.. true feeling
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Reblogged this on Alessandria today @ Pier Carlo Lava.
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Thank you Alessandria for the reblogged. I do appreciate.
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Wow. Thank you so much. This is so beautiful. What gives your ideas shape?
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Real life. I was station at Fort Ord, Ca. from 1991-1994. I wandered the fault-line often. The landscape would change yearly. Thank you for reading and the comment Nathan.
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I really love reading about your inspirational poems, which is why I nominated you for The Real Neat Blog Award: https://thewanderingitinerant.com/2019/03/08/the-real-neat-blog-award/
I hope you can participate! Thanks
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Thank you for reading and the nomination. I do appreciate.
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You’re welcome
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Beautiful words filled with hope, I really enjoyed reading your post, Thank you for sharing.
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Thank you Lucia for reading and the comment. I do appreciate. I believe the beauty we can see. The gifts from the kind gods.
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My pleasure John.
And like you I’m a believer. 🙏🏼🙏🏼
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This is gorgeous, deep and oh so true! I love the directness of your words and images, your Truth and vision. It makes one feel at Home reading your poetry!
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Thank you Kenne . I appreciate the comment and kind words.
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Reblogged this on Seoul Sister and commented:
I’m reposting this gorgeous poem by John Coyote, synchronicity is everywhere, wow and beautiful.
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Thank you Judy.
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Wow, John you’re very magical I think, a natural shaman poet beautiful
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You are very kind Judy. My Ojibwa blood love nature. Nature is where we can know peace and calm.
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Reblogged this on By the Mighty Mumford and commented:
COYOTE POETRY HAS A LOT OF INTERESTING ANGLES TO DISPLAY!
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This is truly beautiful! ❤
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I was saved by the Fault line and the Pacific once. Beautiful places make us know. Life is everlasting and wonderful. Thank you for reading and the comment.
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absolutely!! ❤
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Always have your words reached the reader’s heart…wonderful…
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Thank you dear Poppy for reading and the kind words. If we open our eyes, the world is a beautiful place.
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of course, of course! so beautiful! So funny that we must go on a long journey to find that which was inside us all along. what a gift!
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Waw, I am speechless, this is such a beautiful story and testimony. beautiffully written.
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Thank you Antsafanou. God’s gifts are everywhere. We must open our eyes and see them. Appreciate them.
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It’s so beautifully written. Great.
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Thank you for reading and the comment. So much beauty to be seen if we open our eyes.
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Yes, Opening eyes and having faith.
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Lovely and inspiring write.
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Thank you for reading and the comment. I do appreciate.
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Reblogged this on DARKLIGHT POETRY and commented:
Here is a piece I found worthy taking time to read.
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Thank you Darklight. I appreciate the reblogged.
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Hey. I am ecstatic about nominating you for the Liebster Award 2017, please go through the link and accept the award by answering some questions mentioned there. 🙂
https://explicitwallflower.wordpress.com/2017/12/28/liebster-award-2017/
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Thank you for the nomination. I do appreciate.
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Truly God has spoken to you. I could see the whole trip in the mind
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Thank you Joshua. The gift of God is around us. We need to open our eyes.
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Simply beautiful. Remarkable post!
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Thank you for reading and the comment. I do appreciate.
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Beautiful. I so agree my friend. Finding God is what it is all about.
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I agree. If we open our eyes. The gifts of God is everywhere.
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Reblogged this on Metrical Glee.
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Thank you for the reblogged. I do appreciate.
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I read allowed. I cried throughout. I remember a time when I was your friend, and I had to lead myself out of the darkness. This is more than beautiful words. A journey into soul.
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Thank you for reading and the kind words. All of us need concern, kindness and a friend.
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I love all of your posts and your blog. I am very happy to nominate you for “The Versatile Blogger Award” because you are so awesome and fabulous. Here is my link to that post…. https://myloudbipolarwhispers.com/2017/04/12/i-am-very-honored-to-be-nominated-for-the-versatile-blogger-award/ Please complete the 5 rules as soon as you get a chance. I am eager to see your responses and nominees. Hugs and blessings to you always and forever. ❤
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Thank you for the nomination. I do appreciate.
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You are very welcome for the nomination and you truly deserve it. Hugs. ❤
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John, this is beautiful and touching! God is omnipresent, we just sometimes fail to see His beauty and approach Him with an open heart. If we are alive, we have a purpose – to find God and show others who and what God is.
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I agree and thank you Jayson for reading and the comment.
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It does seem to be a popular reaction to recognize the more destructive aspect of life, the squeaky wheel gets all the attention. But I agree with you, we should not blame God for the evil humanity can do.
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I agree. Human free-will. Thank you for reading and the comment.
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Thank you Rich. I appreciate the reblogged.
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Reblogged this on Pen and Paper and commented:
John Coyote writes with the heart of the Native American Nature; of the Earth, the Sky, the Moon and the Sun as God created for us and to the good spirits that exist in every part of Creation. Just beautiful in heart and Spirit at https://johncoyote.wordpress.com/2014/01/08/i-can-show-you-god/
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thoughtful, triggering and touching. Yes, we can see, talk and feel God…and walk with him. It’s all up to us! Great one ! Keep Smiling!
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Thank you for reading and the comment. I do appreciate.
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🙂
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You are welcome.
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Hello John, it’s Gregory Thomas!
Long time no see! 🙂
It’s been awhile. How are you doing? Hopefully you’re doing fine.
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I’m well and how are you? Just writing and reading.
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Very nice article, excellent piece of philosophy wisdom. I am going to reblog this one for you sir.
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Thank you reading and the reblogged. I do appreciate.
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A beautiful set of poems and a wonderful story!
Dwight
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Thank you. I appreciate the comment.
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This was uplifting without trying to offer all the answers. I am most receptive to wisdom that is down-to-earth, personal, and rooted in acknowledgement of having gone through pain and doubt and having risen from them.
May you touch more lives and reach more questions in 2017.
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Us writers goal is simple. To entertain, teach and tell story. Bob Dylan said it best. “If I saved one life with my song and poetry. I did well.” Thank you for reading and the comment.
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Indeed. Bob Dylan is wise. Cheers.
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He is. Have a safe and fun holiday Iris.
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This poem is so comforting. The room is cold but your writing had such genuine warmth that now I feel all cozy!
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Thank you for the kind words. All of us need a push to appreciate their life.
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Dont be offended, do read about Swami vivekananda
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No. I will check out now. I did and I’m listening to his work now. Thank you for showing me his work and thoughts.
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Thank you for visiting my blog and for writing such a beautiful and insightful poem!
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You are welcome and thank you for reading my words. I do appreciate.
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Your words are so rich in poetry and make me deeply contemplative of the transcendental. You have shaken my slumber of existential nihilism. Anand Bose from Kerala
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Thank you. I appreciate the kind words. We must see the beauty around us or fall to sadness.
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Reblogged this on The Fusion Papers.
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Thank you for the reblogged.
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This was an amazing poem
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Thank you Malkia. So many beautiful things for us to see if we open upour eyes.
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Wow stunning the way you speak and arrange you subject matter interesting. Very educational as well to or from a spiritual alignment I enjoyed this deeply Thank You 🙂
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Thank you for reading and the comment. We must see the gifts of beauty. Gifts for the wise to see.
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Gifts for all to see and feel
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Awesome! ❤
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Thank you Roberta. I appreciate the comment.
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You are welcome! You have a very nice blog 🙂
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I have enjoyed your blog also. I need to read to write. I believe we must learn new knowledge to expand our mind and life to a better place.
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I agree!
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Love it, I must read this again.
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That was really beautiful 🙂
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Thank you Nayana. Nature is the free gift. Few can see. The wonder of nature show us. God is with us.
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Beautiful poem, this is such an another form of saying : we need God in our life. 🙂
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I agree. Thank you for reading and the comment.
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Delighted by this beauty and the way you write. God is within us and it’s for us to find. 🙂
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We must open our eyes and see the gifts of God. Thank you for reading and the comment.
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I am delighted to find you here John Coyote. Thank you for your poetry, your honesty, your Spirit and your connection to the Great Spirit. Warm regards.
Chris Ernest Nelson
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Thank you Chris and you are welcome. We must be kind to nature. She is kind to us.
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Reblogged this on Using God's Word in Everyday Life and commented:
What a good God that we serve. Let us consider the workmanship of His hands. This earth that we live on shows the awesomeness of our God. From the highest majestic mountains to the deepest blue sea; things that no man could ever think up. Most of all His crowning achievement; each and everyone of us whom He formed with His own hands. What a great and wonderful God.
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I agree and thank you for the reblogged.
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Thanks for this post 🙂
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That was a beautiful thing you did for here… The odds of life beginning on it’s own here are 10 to the -39th. power! Brilliantly illustrated! And with a happy outcome too 🙂
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Thank you Spartacus for reading and the comment. I do appreciate.
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Wise words, thanks for sharing!
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Thank you for reading and the kind words.
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So nice!
Check this out, I’d say it’s on your track. 🙂
http://www.drlwilson.com/Articles/POLES%20AND%20CLIMBERS.htm
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Thank you for the information. I added to my favorite and I will research on the next day off.
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Love it! Perfect reflection on my own thoughts about our journey. And thank you so much for checking out my work.
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Thank you for reading and I had enjoyed your work also.
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felt as though it was me, there with you. (perfect! )
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A wise person enjoy the beauty of nature. We are surrounded by the gifts of God. We need to lead with kindness, concern and love. The world would be a better place. Thank you for reading.
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Yeah. True! 🙂
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This is amazing. You know and show some part of the truth. oh and thankyou for the follow 🙂
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Thank you for reading and you are welcome.
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Great buddy !! really happy to read
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Thank you for reading and the comment. I do appreciate.
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Welcome Bro
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thank you for leading me back to the truth
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I needed to read this. like seriously ! Thank you for this !!
Amazing.
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You are very kind. The media in our world show the bad. Rarely the good. We must find the good in our life and our world.
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Brought tears to my eyes…so many people live without peace, my heart breaks for them. Thank you for sharing your stories…Beautiful!
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Thank you Josee for reading and the comment. I do appreciate.
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It’s a nice and very moving poem, John.
Thanks for following my BPD blog!
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Thank you for stopping by and I enjoyed your blog.
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hmm…I may be that girl you met in Santa Cruz. Sounds like me.
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Was a long time ago. 1993. Many of us were searching for some kind of peace.
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Hey there buddy, it’s Gregory Thomas 🙂
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Hello my friend. I saw your site and I ran through earier. How are things going?
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They’re going good. 🙂 still trying to figure out what happens next in my Cascadia adventures story.
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I have two stories waiting for endings. Hard to find time to finish things. Life keeps us busy.
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Yeah, what with me with college and life, and with you with your job and life. I still wish I had more viewers sometimes. I enjoy having followers and stuff, but sometimes I work really hard on a story just to wind up with less than 5 views; but I still wish to thank all the followers that I do have for their support. 🙂
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https://uniqueharmoney.wordpress.com/2015/11/24/i-never-meant-to/
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Powerful stuff, Johncoyote. Thank you for sharing 🙂
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Thank you Megan. I appreciate the comment.
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I so enjoyed reading about this.. the image of you standing with your friend at the abyss watching the hawks is a truly spiritual, a place to find yourself truly.. I often find the same when visiting nature.
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The best places. Far away from the cities and finding places rarely touched and seen. I wish I had to travel. Here in Michigan. A lot of wide open spaces in Northern and upper Michigan to be found and seen. Thank you for reading and the comment.
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Thank you for the reblogged. I do appreciate.
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Hello my Angel! Thank you for such a great post! Also, I wanted to let you know I nominated you for the “One Lovely Blog Award.” 8) Have an great day hun!
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Thank you. I appreciate the nomination.
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🙂
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Reblogged this on wwwpalfitness.
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Thank you for reading and the reblogged. I do appreciate.
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You are quite welcome
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Simply amazing. Look forward to reading more. Thank you for following along my journey as well.
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You are welcome and thank you for stopping by.
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Such a beautiful poem 🙂
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Thank you Jacqueline.
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You are most welcome John
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Beautiful 🙂
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No … thamk you … for your poem –
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Hey buddy! 🙂 Long time no see! How are you?
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I’m fine. Getting ready for work and I hope you are doing well.
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Thanks man, it’s cool to hear back from you. 🙂
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I liked your series. Your words and artwork is amazing. I will be back in the morning. Must work to pay the bills.
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I understand, feel free to read anytime you wish. 🙂
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And thanks for your support.
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Beautiful. He lives in you. Blessings.
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I agree and all around us if we paid attention.
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Beautiful reframing, in poetic form, of one of the age-old dilemmas and conundrums of human beings.
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Thank you for the reblogged. I appreciate.
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Thank you for this post… It’s so shame to admit that sometimes we forgot about how God loves us… specially during adversity… but God never leave us, only us who were too focused on pain instead of embracing His grace… this post is a one of the best reminder of His love…
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I agree. We need to be thankful for the gifts we hold and can see. We do need reminders sometime. Thank you for reading and the comment. I do appreciate.
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Interesting. 🙂
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The gifts of God is splenty, just need to look for the beauty our world. Hate is brought forward. Kindness is not. Thank you for reading and the comment.
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Thank you for the reblogged.
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This is an example of an amazing post. All I can say is bravo.
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Thank you. A wise person can find the good in each new day. Gifts of God are near for the people who want to see.
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Exactly John.
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Thank you for liking my poems. 930 people liked yours! I came to this conclusion too. I feel as if I want to know you! You made me smile and your poem took me on a journey. It was like I was there circling the skies above.
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Thank you Andrew. I read a lot and many kind people read my words. We need to read to write.
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No problem!
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Hello Johncoyote, it’s Gregory Thomas here. 🙂 It’s been quite awhile, but how are you doing? Good I hope. X)
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I’m doing fine and how are you? Doing same things. Watching grandchildren, working and trying to write. Have fun and be safe.
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Definitely man, I still write, as you may already see 🙂 Just trying to stay afloat, but also trying to do good in college too, without going into debt.
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I do understand this. Last daughter is in college. Hard to maintain. But we must.
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Yeah, I’m sure your daughter will prevail, it’s high way robbery how expensive college can be.
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I agree.
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you are a great philosopher! great work! 🙂
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Thank you. I believe if we open our eyes. Can find equal good to bad in our world. We must reach for the good things.
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Reblogged this on Amity and commented:
I find this interesting. keep up the beautiful work John
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Thank you for reading and the reblogged. I do appreciate.
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I was very moved by your words and heart @johncoyte. You are a mighty warrior, a joyful babbling fool I would be proud to share a drink with in happy times. I wish you the peace you share with your words and life. Sing your song forever! I love you!
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Thank you and I would be honor to share a drink with you also.
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Dear Friend,
really amazing lines by you, i love it.
thanks for liking my blog
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Thank you for reading and the comment. Your title caught my attention. Good to be a free spirit.
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This really struck a chord in me. It touches on something holy. Remarkably beautiful!
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Thank you Elizabeth. We must want to see the beauty and the gifts of God.
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I wholeheartedly agree.
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There is a special quality to your poetry, they can be imagined like a video clip, happening right before the readers eyes, your words are more real and give the actual feel.
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Thank you Mayank. I appreciate the comment.
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This is a Good piece of work buddy, I enjoyed reading it. And I loved the concept of a poem within a poem 🙂 it is very cool. Glad to be your follower.
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Beautiful, John. I thought I was following your blog, but somehow I lost you and had to hit the follow button again.
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Thank you Laine for reading and the comment. I do appreciate you stopping in.
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Hey there, John! I nominate you in “If You are A Quote Lover” Nomination, I hope you don’t mind that I choose you. 🙂
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Thank you. I appreciate the nomination.
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Lovely! 🙂
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I cherish the Native American spirit I find in this beautiful poem, John. I find much wholeness when immersed in nature, reminding me of God With/In. Thank you for sharing this with us. And thank you for your frequent visits to my blog.
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You are welcome and I appreciate you also.
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John, I have nominated you for an award. Please go to https://wordpress.com/post/82039960/1215 for rules. I love your inspiring words and encouragement. Congratulations. Anne
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Okay
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you have seen the scars and miseries of war thus value life and the nature of God who is but love only- God bless you John
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Thank you Tanveer. Nature is a gift from the God, for the wise people.
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Thank you for the follow and likes. 🙂
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You are welcome. I enjoyed your site. Good photos and words.
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Interesting thoughts John. As for me, what struck me is the end when the girl said, “God is for us to find.” I personally believe that we don’t find God, but He already came down and found us. It’s up to us to believe He has or hasn’t. I believe He has. And I believe that I have relationship with Him, thanks to His gift. What do you base your beliefs about God on? How did you come to your understanding and belief in God? I’m interested to know.
Take care
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I’m 1/2 Ojbwa. We pray to God and appreciate the gifts of nature. Gifts of a generous God. I believe God must be found if you get lost or confused. I had to be at my lowest ppoint to know. God is near and he protect the good people.
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I found God at my lowest point. Actually, it had been some time that He had been pursuing me. I had been searching spirituality for some time. I was asking all those questions that people at one point or another in life ask – How did I get here? Where am I going when I die? Why are people afraid of death? What is my purpose in life? – I couldn’t just accept any old thing, you know. I couldn’t bring myself to believe in all the stuff I was trying out. I wanted to know the real truth. I was at my lowest, just like you.
So you’re Ojibwa? Cool. Are you from the US or Canada? Do you speak Anishinaabe? From what I know the spiritual beliefs that are commonly practiced amongst the Ojibwa are orally passed down from one generation to the next, right?
🙂
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No. My poor Grandmother was took from her family and forced into white men schools in the old days. That is another story. My tribe is Upper Michigan. I wished I learn the language.
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Oh my gosh. That is so sad. I know a bit about the history of the First Nations and the white man. It’s a horrific story, to say the least. I’m so sorry for your grandmother. I have a friend that’s first nations and she writes songs. She has a couple of CDs and she recorded one song that had to do with the young being taken away from their parents to go and study in the ‘white man’s’ school system. When I hear it, it makes me cry. If you would like to hear the song, you can do so here:
Brace yourself, because it really does move the emotions. Even now I’m listening to it and my eyes are welling up. It’s sad to see how humanity can do such horrible things.
Take care.
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Thank you and I will listen now.
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Hope you like it.
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I did and thank ypu.
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you’ve been nominated for free style writing challenge. look up for details here https://architarai.wordpress.com/2015/05/14/126/ 🙂
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Thank you dear Poet. I will look at later. I work tonight and I’m off to bed.
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Sure, take all your time. 🙂
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Beautiful.
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Thank you Kevin.
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Wonderful to read and ponder and feel deeply for the search. Thank you.
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You are welcome and thank you for reading.
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You write so beautifully. I have nominated you on my blog for two awards. Check it out 😀 Thank you for all your words of encouragement.
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Thank you Elena.
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Beautiful poetry John I enjoyed the comments and your replies. I am an agnostic torn between the sight of a child dying of hunger and the amazing beauty of the world. I doubt I will ever reconcile it. Thank you for this lovely message .
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You are welcome. I understand your thoughts. Hard to see any good with war and hate in so many places.
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Yes, there is beauty everywhere in spite of that, in the lines of poetry for example :-).
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I agree.
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Thank you for a beautiful poem, an inspiring story.
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You are welcome and thank you for reading.
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“God is in you. In the deeds you do and life you live” Yes.
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I agree and thank you for reading and the comment.
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So, so deeply beautiful. Speaks of true medicine and the purity that moves in us all! Blessings again. Communing with…
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Thank you Janice. I appreciate the comment.
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Hey there!
I have nominated you for the Versatile Blogger Award. Click here for the rules 🙂
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Congratulations John!
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Thank you and I will take a look at the award tomorrow. Just stopping by. Working and sleeping today.
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Yes sure John! Your posts are very real and inspiring! 🙂 take your own time. 🙂
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Why do you have to call these things and experiences ‘God’? Do you know what obscenities have been committed over the ages, and are still being commited, by people who insist on condensing all experience into this single word? And then insisting to others that their interpretation of the experience of being is the only one worth valuing? The meaning of the word ‘God’ is rarely if ever discussed. Instead, assumptions are made. If I was to say I believed in God, you would assume certain things. And it’s a certainty that what you assume is not what I have in mind. America is plagued by fruitcakes who insist on belief in myth regardless of what their, presumably God given, intellect tells them is obviously true. They prescribe for the world – the US comprsies 6% of world population and is a relatively new culture – what they should believe and are prepared to bomb them into submission if they don’t agree, especially if they have oil. I have no time for this use of the word ‘God’. What I might understand by the word is my business. And is the private business of each of us. It is too complex a word to use in poetry designed for an audience beyond oneself.
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My words are just words. Someone needed help and I try to show them there is beauty. I’m 1/2 Ojibwa. I believe we need to live in peace with nature. This is one planet and one people. I believe when war and hate is alive. It will come to your door. I know what is being done. I served for almost 15 years and saw the damage done for oil and profit. God is a term and I do believe something or someone create this mess. Poetry is just words expressed by the writer. My opinion is my opinion. In my lifetime. Few people had accepted my view. We decide our journey and view. I read daily and I listen. Life is learning. I hope there is a better place. Old age had taught me. I pray for peace for all people. I want my children and all children to be safe and sound. I don’t blame God for this mess the world is in. I blame greed, bad leadership and nations who is based on war. Thank you for your thoughts. My favorite book is Jack London book “When God laugh”. He wrote. The Gods always win. Maybe he was right. Men will trip and fall till one day. Nothing will be left?
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David, it is poetry. The best form to use such a word! If you say you believe in God, I assume certain things, someone else might assume different things, each person from his own perspective. A Conservative Christian would assume different things than a Liberal Muslim, for example. John, love your writing!
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Thank you Kip. I appreciate the comment.
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This is so wise and achingly beautiful. “God has saved me many times”. Me too. God always gives man free choice, God does not create wars, Humans do that. So soulful ❤
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I agree again. Free-will. It is sad we live in a world that want profit over human concern. Thank you for reading and the comment.
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GOD IS FOR US TO FIND…
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I agree. We must open our eyes and our mind to know and see the gifts of God.
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This message is a powerful rendering of truth that needs to be shared and spread around. I challenge you to pass this spark along.
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I do my best. I write on five sites and I hope someone is listening. Thank you for reading and the positive words.
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Wow, this is so very beautiful and true, very inspiring. I agree with all you said, so glad you can share it so lovingly, nice work. I am really looking forward to reading more of your work, you have a special gift with words. Thank you, and thank you for following my blog, I greatly appreciate it and look forward to any comments you might feel like making! Namaste
much light and love to you
Michelle
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Thank you Michelle. I appreciate the comment.
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Beautiful.
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Thank you John. I appreciate the comment.
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Great pieces as usual. I was there and watched the Hawks with you….
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The fault line, a perfect place to find nature. Thank you for reading my friend.
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Very good piece from Coyote….
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Thank you my friend for the reblog. I will stop by now and see your new site.
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Very well written John! I enjoyed and love the story and the poem! You are truly an amazing writer.
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Thank you. You are very kind.
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Hi, John… I have chosen you to participate in love in ten sentence challenge, but there’s no obligation… If you have the time and care to join, please follow the link for instructions: https://lumar1298.wordpress.com/2015/03/25/love-in-ten-sentences/
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Thank you. No time today. Working my 55 hours in four days. I work four days and four days off.
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Those seemingly ageless mountains can make us forget and remember the past, present and into the future.
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I agree and thank you for reading and the comment.
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anytime!
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Glory.
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Thank you for reading and the comment. Took me many years to learn. Gifts of God are near. We must open our eyes.
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Truly God’s existence need not be questioned….The creator …..
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Searching for God was very fruitful for me because now there is faith in me when before there was none as I being one felt as nothing before the faith of God!!
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I agree. We must open our eyes to see the gifts of God. Thank you for reading and the comment.
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When we find ourselves its because of God – nice write
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Thank you for reading and the comment. I agree with your comment.
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This is amazingly beautiful! I had tears in my eyes. Thank you for sharing this
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Thank you for reading and the comment. I do appreciate the kind words.
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I linked up to this on Old Timer Chronicle III ~ I hope its okay with you…
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It is okay with me. Thank you for sharing my work. I do appreciate.
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Thank you!
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Hmmmmm, Now this is deep and profound
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Just thoughts after a long life. My Ojibwa heritage teaches me. Many gifts for us to see and behold. We must open our eyes. Thank you for reading and the comment.
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This is a wonderful poem and advising words. i was very much touched cause i don’t think i could have said it better. 🙂 nice to read a fellow poets work who shares the same views 🙂
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I like your view also. We must live in peace with nature. We need her more than she needs us.
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Your poem “I can show you God” should be mandatory reading in every high school in the country. Maybe kids would see their coming life in a whole new way.
Thanks for the like and follow today 4/5/15. Will contnue to follow your posts. Great stuff!
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Thank you Richard. The gifts of God are with us. Kids need to put down their computers and cell phone. Roam and touch the beauty of the earth.
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that made me cry… that is beauty and truth. May there be more souls like you 🙂
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Thank you for reading. We need to open our eyes to the gifts given.
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Hi, thanks for visiting my blog.
I have found that God comes in many shapes and in many guises and that what is important is the values we live by and the good heart of the person.
You have a good heart and we need such spirit to light up our world.
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Thank you for stopping by and the kind words. I do appreciate.
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You are most welcome.
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I love this.
Thank you for following my blog. I’m following back.
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Thank you for reading and I’m glad to have met you.
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You’re very welcome. Likewise.
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Hi John I so agree. Such words of wisdom and truth. Thank you so much for liking my poem ‘Warming!’ Peace and Best Wishes. The Foureyed Poet.
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You are welcome.
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great epic poem.. wonderful
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Thank you for reading and the comment. I do appreciate.
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Thank you for the follow! I have long enjoyed your poems and photos. I always look forward to your posts. Please visit often and always feel welcomed.
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I will. I love your work.
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Im glad you shared this poem again John it never grows old. Thank you so much for reblogging my Martin Luther King Jr poem.
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I did two poems for Martin Luther King Jr. Many thanks me for remember the great man. We can’t forget the men who die for the right things. For the dream of equality and you are welcome.
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A beautiful piece of work John, very inspiring and deeply touching, so many truths eloquently put. Thanks fro visiting my blog. If this is the quality and meaningfuless of your work I will be back for much more!
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Your poem stimulated a frequent memory for me. As an atheist in AA, I have sponsored many people and part of what I do is to take the future recoveree on God walks. How can I do that as an atheist? I do exactly what you did. I show them things in the world around them that are wondrous; can be seen as miracles, and that run without any help from anybody. Once I pointed at a water spigot standing on the edge of the property next to an arroyo that ran through the Sonoran Desert surrounding Tucson. I said, if you had been walking for hours without water, THAT would be like a gift from God to you, and not just an output from our urban utility.
To find your God, one must look.
Thanks for liking my poem on WordMusic.
Brent Kincaid
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I agree. Thank you for reading and the comment.
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Great poem! Nature is God’s canvas and where we go to admire his art. For me, it is the hardest place to deny his existence.
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You are right. Nature showed us. There is beauty near us always. Thank you for reading and the comment.
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Wonderment #1
Water rushes, tickling feet with sand.
Gilgamesh relaxes by the sea.
Purple Echinacea sends a cone into rain.
Chopin laughs and strokes his polonaise.
A beetle digs the desert, over oil.
Chang sung-up daubs a mystery in ink.
Water trickles down a granite wall.
Lao-Tsu hikes through summer’s offerings.
Yellow lilies waver in the wind.
Tasman lacquers the last board of his keel.
Crystals mingle with Icelandic ash.
Lodi licks his chops, nudge-nudge, wink-wink.
Water batters barns from red to gray.
Burck paints Freda as Leipzig hums along.
Canandaigua feels the White Snake’s breath.
Handsome Lake enjoys a drive-in movie.
Sesame rice lands in a wooden bowl.
Africa snaps a twig and starts to think.
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Thank you for reading and the beautiful words. I do appreciate.
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Thank you johncoyote for this this wonderful journey.
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You are welcome and thank you for reading and the comment.
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Enjoyed reading this beautiful, spiritual writing today. Thank you!
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Thank you Connie for reading. We need to appreciate the gifts of God. Easy for us to see if we open our eyes.
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Dope deep poem
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Thank you. I appreciate the comment.
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This is amazing!!! And btw, thank you for the follow. 🙂
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Thank you for reading and you are welcome.
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This is amazing… I really enjoyed reading this. Keep up the good work and good luck 🙂
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Thank you. I appreciate the comment.
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Beautiful and moving sentiments, so eloquently presented. Thank you!
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You are welcome and thank you for reading. I do appreciate.
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SPLENDIDA DOMENICA baci 🙂
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Thank you.
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Hello, I have nominated you for a Very Inspiring Blog Award: http://cosywords.com/2014/12/21/very-inspiring-blog-award/
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Thank you. I appreciate the nomination.
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Soul inspiring poetry. Thank you for inspiring my thoughts!
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You are welcome. I’m glad I inspired your thoughts.
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What an incredible read. That was remarkably beautiful John. Thank you for opening the spiritual eyes of so many. Humbly your friend…
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Thank you Geino. Gods gifts are all around us. We must open our to see them.
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Hi John. We each find what we believe in for good or bad. And I do like the native americans respect for the earth and spirits. I prefer to observe life. Always weary of any religions where mankind has an input! Thank you so much for liking my ghost story poem ‘ The Signalman!’ Best Wishes. The Foureyed Poet.
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Thank you for stopping by. I enjoyed your poetry. History, story and myth are my favorite.
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I like the fact you called the poem; ‘I can show you God’ then put a photo of you at the top of the post 🙂 I like it. You have a sense of humour.
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I’m far from God. More of a purgatory Inn type guy.Nature can be called a part of God. The good gifts were given to us and few appreciate. I do have a sense of humor. I never thought about me and the mountain as the lead.
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I know, I was only joking. I love your writing.
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Thank you Amber.
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Mello-Elo is right, we would have a good conversation 🙂
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Wow! What a fabulous post! Thank you~
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Thank you. We must open our eyes to see the gifts of God.
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I agree! And for some, God can be felt in nature.
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That is where I can find him.
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Ditto!
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Wow! What a fabulous post!
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Congratulations!
I gave nominated your blog for the Real Neat Blog Award.
More about this nomination is at
http://dearkitty1.wordpress.com/2014/12/05/real-neat-blog-award-thanks-so-much-horty/
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Thank you. I will come back Sunday and check out. On my 4 days and 55 hours of work.
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Well deserved 🙂 All the best!
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You just took me down a wonderful journey. Thank you.
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You are welcome. Your words stand tall. I will return and read your good words and thoughts. .
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This is such an inspiring piece ..Caro
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Thank you Caro. The desert and the forest. Best place to find the calmness of God.
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Interesting revelations about faith.
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Just my basic belief. We are give gifts and it is our decision to use them and see the beauty of our world. Thank you for reading and the comment.
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I just read your story, I will come back. That is exactly how I felt a few years ago. I had heard so many stories and was so apprehensive of walking back inside a church after such a long time…I did and it is the best thing I could of done for myself…I now walk with a clear head and walk in peace and live in peace.
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Church is good. We need both. God gifts are everywhere. Thank you for reading and the comment.
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so much trouble to enlighten an old maid – bless you.
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beautiful. (and so is the comment you left just above this one about laughter and family time.) God bless.
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Thank you for reading and the comment. I do appreciate.
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Every time I spend time in nature, my faith in God only increases.
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Me too. Thank you for reading.
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Wow. Consider me your fan. I really liked : “They just whisper. Life is fair. Take what you need. Don’t abuse the land. Love and respect your neighbors.” If we only did this the world would be so different. But the world is what it is and we just have to see the God in ourselves and in others. I loved this! Thank you. What do you use sage for? I have had some before and it smelled good but I am interested in its uses and the reparative properties of nature and the earth.
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Sage had many uses. Used to cleanse area for ceremony and many other uses. I will answer more questions tomorrow. Good night.
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Thank you lieber Gruß Gislinde
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Thank you for stopping by and reading. I do appreciate.
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Resonating post. You only have to observe for a little time to see the masters work. Thanks for stopping by at my blog. I look forward to reading more of yours.
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Thank you for stopping by. I do appreciate.
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We often fail to appreciate the beauty that lies within our world
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I agree. Thank you for reading.
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Hi, thanks for visiting my blog, good to meet you! 🙂
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The same here. I enjoyed your blog.
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This is perfect. Very very beautiful. Thanks for sharing it 🙂
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You are welcome. Thank you for stopping by and reading.
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This is just perfection , I loved it, felt identified with it , it made me think , analyze and feel . What more can I ask for ? Superb.
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Thank you Sylvia. I appreciate the positive comment.
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Just wanted to stop by and check out your blog and thank you for the follow. What a compliment!
I hope that I will continue to deliver content that uplifts and inspires you.
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Thank you for stopping by and I added you to my favorites.
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Lovely poem. I wish you continued years of happiness, connection, health, and gratitude in this life.
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Thank you. I hope for you, joy, happiness and peace also. We must seek the good even when it is hard to find.
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Beautiful story & poem! 🙂
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Thank you Bette. I appreciate the comment.
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“God isn’t our master or guide.
Life is for us to decide.”
You say the truth, John Coyote…God is all around us…and we have to take the responsibility for our own lives…acting with love…I think that is why I find organized (crazy adjective for God…lol) religion off-putting…I was raised Catholic…educated Catholic…and I think it does not put enough response-ABILITY on the person. God is going to solve all the problems so it takes us off the hook. I have to develop this idea more…but, that has been my experience and when people say, “God wanted it to happen like that”–I am really turned off. You present God in our world in a way that I can accept and live. Thank you for this wonderful post!
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Thank you for reading and the good comment. I tell people often. Can’t blame God. We decide our journey good or bad.
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So relevant,true and relatable!😊 *applauds* 🙂
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Thank you for reading and the comment, I do appreciate.
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This is beautiful and I totally relate. The evidence is everywhere, around and inside us.
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Yes it is. Thank you for reading.
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I feel sorry for the folks who are blind to the miracles of Life.
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We must show them. Take them to a waterfall, sea or Great Lake. Show them the field of wildflowers. Ask them. Who create this beauty. Thank you for reading my words.
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John, you’re so sweet and your words: so evocative and resonant.
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Thank you Sandra. We must look for the good in our life. Otherwise we won’t see the beauty that is near.
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you are a great poet – and your moving words here are mixed with that California setting that made it even more tasty – just one thing to note – for me – I find that God is also a life guide – but not getting into any theology here – it is not needed but just had to note that.
anyhow – love the fault line reference and could picture the 3 hours trek – I used to teach science at Sanborn park off of Saratoga Road in CA – and this poem brought me back to those hills and trees. and we used to teach about Ohlone Inidans too –
anyhow,
favorite section from your poem:
I smiled and pointed to the sea.
I told her God is alive.
Look at the dancing sea.
The sun above us. Gifts for us from God.
have a nice week
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I agree. The fault. A perfect place to find peace and beauty. Thank you for the many comments.
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de nada – 🙂 and I hope to look around more of your blog later on as time permits – cos it is great example of the enriching meta that can be found in the blog world – you have a great blog. take care
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A great story. Thank you. I shall not write more because I wouldn’t be able to stop so I will go, bless you.
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Thank you for reading and the comment. I do appreciate.
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Thank you for visiting & following my blog, for I would never have come across your beautiful poetry otherwise. You are so gifted! I love this poem– this line you wrote especially inspired me:
“I took her hands and whispered. He had saved me many times. He led
me to safety from dangerous places and situations. He awoke me to
skip death and maybe I can give someone hope.”
You are inspiring many people, my friend, with your beautiful gift from God. Your life is a Blessing on this earth. I thank The Lord for you. ~Suzanne
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Thank you Suzanne.. I appreciate the positive comment. I have been saved often. We must look above the negative to know the gifts of God.
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Beautiful story and thoughts!
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Thank you. I believe in my Ojibwa heritage. Man and nature must get along. One earth and one planet. We must get along too.
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Too true and alas we are not at the moment.
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I hope we change before we cross the line of no return.
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Me, too!
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Beautiful. God is within each one of us, to be heard as long as we can silence the mind. To share and open another soul to any form of faith, love, and beauty, is priceless.
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God came, God went, and in between, and everywhere in the seams, God lives, and inspires us through dreams. God lives within/without you – as long as you continue to listen, you will never fail.
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I agree. Not only dreams. He showed us beauty and make us know. Love and kindness is the way.
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Beautiful.
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You are very inspiring to me John
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Thank you for reading an the comment.. The beauty of life is near if we open our eyes. Most folks don’t..
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Thanks for liking my post! Your writing is amazing! Writing is my passion and I would like to become a freelance writer. Blogging is the first step!
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You are right. Blogging create a network and friendship. Need both to expand to new places.
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A wonderful distinct journey and so worth the miles 🙂
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It was. Thank you for reading and the comment.
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Thank you for such an awesome piece of art; you definitely love and know beauty God has given you and your willingness to share shows. Much divine guidance to your blessings! Peace
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Thank you. We must open our eyes and see the gifts of God.
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Hi, you’ve been called in
“The Very Inspiring Blogger Award”, nomination che si attribuisce ai blogger e ai blog che si considerano fonte di ispirazione nell’ambito di riferimento, in questo caso specifico l’ambito Beauty: Nel mio caso, bellezza interiore che si converte e sostiene la bellezza esteriore…
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Thank you for the nomination. I do appreciate.
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You paint such an exquisite picture with words….beautiful:) thank you so much. Janet.
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Thank you Janet. I appreciate the comment. Give me reasons to keep writing.
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This is beautiful. Can picture it perfectly. Inspires me to reconnect with God, I’ve been living in the city too long now…
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Me too. I take my Grand-boys to the lakes and forest. We need to remember their are better places to be. Thank you for reading and the comment.
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Great poem. You are very talented. Beautiful !!!!!
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Thank you. I was lucky. A young woman in California showed me years ago. You must find the beauty that is near to us.
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John, so beautiful, amazing!!!! You touched me, truly!!! 🙂 Love, blessings – liz
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Thank you. We must look for the beauty in our world and life.
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Wow, this is beautiful on many levels. Thank you for sharing it.
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Thank you for your visit and following. I want to say that the goodness and the beauty of God is made manifest in us. That’s the fact of life unless we refuse to acknowledge that reality.
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You are right. We need to open our eyes and see the gifts. Thank you for reading and the comment.
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You have this amazing talent of touching people’s hearts with your words…this poem especially touched my heart and brought tears into my eyes. It also made me smile and feel hopeful and grateful that people like you are a part of my world.
Thank you so much for following my blog and for liking my latest post, I’m honored and it motivates me to write. And thank you for being the amazing person that you truly are and for sharing your talent and your inner beauty with the world.
Blessings of love and inspiration in your life,
Carissa
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Thank you Carissa Maria. You made my day with positive comment.
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Good stuff John mate
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Thank you. Nature is peace. I need a year vacation on some coastline.
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Scotland, really, is a good place to find peace and get lost in yourself or with another…
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I would like Scotland. Almost marry a Scotland girl once. I do like good beer and drink. Scotland had both.
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Yeah it does.. We are a nordic race. same as Sweden, Norway etc..
So how did you almost marry a Scottish girl?
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A long story. She was working in Germany in 1978. She was a beauty. Some of my poetry. She appeared in the old photos.
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Thank you for sharing with us what you are very, very good at (poetry and explanation). My approach is a bit different but I can see that you explain God very well.
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Thank you. Many ways to find God and know peace.
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We need to see more wonderful posts like this.
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Thank you. I appreciate the positive comment.
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little brother of the sacred packe…i stopped by looking for new candy today, finding none, i indulged in a re-read of this epic recapitulation – not prose not poetry but something better than both – i found our ancient hart soaring higher & wider into the majestic space creAted by your vast & wilde soul…my the great spirit cross our paths one day! until this prayer a whitewolfe bows to a great coyote! ❤ u bro! ~~~~^^*^^~~~~~
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Thank you. Nature is our peace and calm. Good to spend time with the beauty of the forest and the river.
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It is a beautiful story John and I liked the message.
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Thank you. I appreciate the comment.
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What a lovely tribute to the Almighty!! I am now following you. I love your work!
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Thank you for reading and the comment. I do appreciate.
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Waste
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http://monimorphism.com/2014/07/21/one-lovely-blog-award/
I have nominated you for the One Lovely Blog award. Please read link for details.
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Thank you for the nomination. I do appreciate.
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You a very welcome.
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I have loved…I have lost my breath..and I have said goodbye…..but to say hello and acknowledge the strength of faith…. Leaves me silent and yearning…… and haunted.
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Thank you for reading and the comment. Love should be the best part of us.
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hey ,I wanted to come by and let you know that you have been nominated check my blog thanx 🙂
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Thank you for the nomination.
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Perfection! Loved it
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Thank you Sylvia for reading and the comment. I do appreciate.
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When are you going to write something with me? I’d be honored if you ever got the time! hastywords@gmail.com
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We can. We need to set a time. I work a bad work schedule. I have three days off.
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You can start anytime you want. It is back and forth only as we get time so even if takes awhile I would love to do it.
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Okay. Tonight we shall try, if you can. I will return tonight. I work the night shift. Time for my nap. Pick a interesting topic and I will follow.
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Thank you for choosing to follow my blog Scribbledartsfromtheheart. This is a beautiful piece of writing. Thank you for sharing and bringing my attention to your site! Thank you for the hope and the inspiration…
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You are welcome. Thank you for reading and the comment. I enjoyed your work also.
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Hi, thanks for following me. Do you really undestrand what I write?
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Yes. I use a translator. I wished I spoke and wrote more languages. The language translator allowed me to read the work of writers in most languages.
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Enjoyed reading it 🙂 keep up the good work 😀 if you are ever interested in some collaborations feel free to contact me I am always up to write with other people 🙂
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Thank you for reading and the comment. Remind me later. A collaboration could be interesting. I work a bad schedule. Some days hard to find time to think and relax.
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…brother coyote! u have been tagged! dafree whitewolfe posted a homage to u, an imprivisational meditation on a poem yours! gassho brother of the sacred packe! ^^~~~~
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Thank you. I be honored to be part of the sacred pack.
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Brilliant work John.
Definitely one of my favorites of yours.
Cheers,
-Lance
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Thank you. My Native American belief make me realize. Man and nature must be one.
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It’s like a poetic story unfolding a miracle. Beautiful.
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Nature should be. Thank you for reading and the comment.
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…how difference between a coyote & a white wolfe?…both are wilde & free & live close to the mother of all creatures…we belong to the same sacres packe, my brother! ~~~~^^*^^~~~~
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You are right. Both want freedom and land to roam.Thank you for stopping by.
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my pleasure! your savory words help sate my ravenous appetite for palpable poetry! ^^~~~~
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I’m glad.
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Nice poem. Thanks for the follow!
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Thank you Karyl for reading.I do appreciate.
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You are welcome.
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Reblogged this on Eslkevin's Blog and commented:
a poet and ancient
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Good night friends! Sleep well and sweet dreams, and smiles when you’re sleeping

We hear tomorrow night as beautiful and quiet!
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She asked. “Are we trick into believing in the wrong things?
Do we blind ourselves from the real beauty. Do we waste time and life on
useless things?”
A question we should all ask ourselves.
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I agree. I had to lose two brothers to suicide to slow down and listen. Life isn’t money. Money mean little when you are alone. Better to be the safe place to rest for family and friends.
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A beautiful story. 🙂 Love the feel of your site. Much love and hope.
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Thank you. I appreciate the kind words.
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…interesting read in that it reminds me of conversations impregnated with dust!…it reminds us too of Gerard Manley Hopkins & his ability to distil a fugative moment of epiphany into poetry…your poem suffers a lack of such a shock as hopkins gives as it is too didactic & anecdotal…for example, you attempt to re-define the abstract word God by pointing to Nature, a great romantic tradition! God is a concept and as all concepts empty of Truth, hence the judaic insight that finite things (words) cannot define something infinite so it prohibited to refer to such except through archetypes, euphemisms, similies,metaphors & myths (poetry)! Animism is the ground of Spirituality, the ‘moral’ of your story. In an increasingly urbanized global village of technology many are those who have never tasted the salt of the sea on sun-parched lips. get beyond preaching & inspire by painting us the rainbow that is the love in your hart! ^^~~~~
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I’m using my life. I’m 1/2 Ojibwa and found my way to real vision late in life. I wished I pay attention to my Ojibwa Grandmother. She spoke one time to my mother how they changed her name and took her to a Catholic school and cut her hair. I wished mankind would learn. We are one with nature. We need her more than she needs us. I teach the old vision with kindness. Hard to change the minds of blinded people. Thank you for the comment. Life is learning and understanding what is true..
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…yes! i understand! dafree whitewolfe is my totem, but i find nothing in that that conflicts with catholicism not as practiced by catholics but as taught by its saints & martyrs! ^^~~~~
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Loved it..so true..a good reminder of each of us..
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Thank you. We must open our eyes and be thankful for the good things.
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I for one do not know what to believe, but I liked those three sentences in your poem very very much: Take what you need. Don’t abuse the land. Love and respect your neighbors. If only I may add one sentence: Give back as much as you can. Thanky you for sharing.
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I agree. We need to give back.Thank you for reading and the comment.
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Lovely post and I believe this was a perfect example of how to find and see God in our world today.
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We must open our eyes to see the beauty of our world. Thank you for reading and the comment.
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Beautiful words! Thank you for visiting my website at toneuptoronto.com and “liking” my post on crossover lunges. I can’t wait to keep reading your poetry.
– Kendall
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Thank you for your blog also. You have a very entertaining blog.
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Just beaitiful…
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Thank you Lindy for reading and the comment.
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Really God is for us to find and God is generous to people who value beauty and nature. I so love this poetic insight.
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Thank you. A wise person is thankful for the new day, family and the beauty of nature.
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Truly bro.
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Absolutely beautiful. Love the part about the hawks, and how God is like an artist. I have always felt the same way, like I am surrounded by His artwork and it is stunning to look at!
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A wise person appreciate the gifts of God. It is all around us. Thank you for reading and the comment.
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Beautiful poem. Beautiful heart.
Thank you for following our blog. I hope you enjoy the stories of our journey, both inner and outer.
Blessings, Alison
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thanks for following. nice poetry you have here.
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Thank you for reading and stopping by.
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I love this piece that you have written. I can quite feel myself with you in that very special place, You and I have similar ideas about God.
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God is in all things. We must open our eyes to see. Thank you for reading and the comment.
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I would show you God.
God is in you. In the deeds you do and life you live. ……………..very beautiful concept depicted nicely
with regards
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Thank you. I appreciate your time reading and commenting on my work.
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Love it and love God. God has helped me through a lot (through a fire to tell a story) 🙂
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I agree. I have been saved often. God give mercy. Even to people who don’t deserve it. Thank you for reading and the comment.
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Thank you for following Willow Post. And thank you for making me pause, and read. Beautiful words here, and throughout your site. 🙂
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Thank you Deanna. You are very kind for the positive words. We need people to read us and give us reasons to keep writing.
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Hey John! I just wanted to let you know that I have nominated you for the Liebster Award! To find out what the Liebster Award is all about, head to my post here at http://lulubellaloveslife.wordpress.com/2014/05/13/liebster-blog-award-nomination/ Congratulations!
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Thank you for the nomination. I do appreciate.
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We are all God 🙂
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In a sense. I do believe all life is connected in different ways. Each of us have a part to play. Thank you for reading and the comment. I do appreciate.
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Your spirituality erases the maze of religions confined to ornamental structures and takes us to where God resides and shows us his endless wonders. As a climber, I always felt closer to God in that moment I gained a summit, sat to relax and survey the vast expanse of nature, earth and sky. You write powerful medicine for the reader’s soul. Thank you!
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Nature is the gift, God gave us. A wise person appreciate the beauty of the mountain, the sea and the trees. Thank you for reading and the comment.
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