Dark Poetry: Suicide
I lost two brothers to suicide. I learn to listen and understand. Each of us want less or more. Please pay attention to the people we love.
Suicide
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It seems so easy
No more pain
Just one little step
And your life becomes in vain
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It’s just so tempting
No more sorrow
A couple of pills
And no more tomorrow
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It seems about right
No more suffering
Just one little cut
And no more fighting
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It’s just so soothing
No more contest
Just one quick shot
And you’re finally at rest
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Just jump of the bridge
Across the river of life
Lights out, forever blind
But what of the hurt?
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For those you’ll leave behind…
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– Just Patty –
She’s a great writer and must have lost someone dear to her on suicide…
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Suicide effect all of us. I lost two brothers to suicide in 1988-1989. Leave us with great sadness.
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What is this about? She is a great poet, but she writes poison sometimes.
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I lost two brothers to suicide. Just spreading the words about suicide.
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im sorry. but what was the root cause of the tragedy, PSD maybe… if one could guess. Where they soldiers too?
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I don’t know. Hard to say. My brothers killed themselves because they couldn’t face life. Many reasons for suicide. My brothers death made me to whom I’m today. A listener, not the teachers. I learn too late. Each of us are different. I learn a open door and kind words could of saved them. Regret is a good teacher.
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And you have strength and I have hope and both is a good thing. Bless you.
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All of us learn the hard way. I learn we must lead with kindness and love.
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