Her red dress
Her red dress
A Poem by Coyote Poetry
I needed to write a poem about a woman in a red dress who stole my hearts many moons ago.
Lady elegance with hair of auburn brown. She waited by her window. She wished on the first star and the moon. To feel needed and wanted. She is lady sad and lonely. She had spend too much time alone in the house.
Once she was lady love. She wanted to be wild and wanted to dance, drink and sing. Sweet kisses of regret had become kisses missed and wished for in the dust of the closing night.
Deny kisses and long embraces are remembered by a careless man. He remembered his love dancing in her red dress. Her shoulders bare and her long legs barely hidden by the soft material of her red dress. He called her and he told her.
My sweet love, put on your red shoes and your red dress. Tonight we drink, dance and find some laughter. I want you ready to celebrate the night. You are my salvation and joy. I love and die in your eyes of joy or sadness. Tonight we will dance and find the places we forgot. We will leave behind the useless places and life.
Lady sweet and forgiving. She allowed her tears to fall. She wanted to feel needed and alive. Her prayer were answered. She found her red dress and held her red shoes. She whispered quietly. Thank you kind Gods of the night and love for allowing me to be content.
Coyote/John Castellenas
this is particularly beautiful John, such lovely pictures of the lady in red!
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I love it. I love the picture you draw in your poem.
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Thank you Arwa. I appreciate the positive comment.
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I love red dresses, beatiful words
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A red dress can make the woman come alive and have some fun.. Thank you for reading and the comment.
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Captured beautifully again John – like the memory of a red wine that got better with time….
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You are right. Thank you for reading and the comment.
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Love it! BTW I just passed the torch your way! Don’t feel obligated through. 🙂 http://www.jaymerayne.com/meet-my-character-blog-tour/
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this is beautiful1!!
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Thank you Damilare. I appreciate the comment.
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John! This is fabulous! Wow! I Love what you have written here! And the images … perfect, just perfect. Thank YOU so much! Love, Amy
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Thank you Amy for reading and the comment. I do appreciate.
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I appreciate every comment I get and I really do try to get to all who come to see me at Petals. I really like your work, John, and even on the days I don’t have “time” to comment, know YOU are appreciated. (((HUGS))) Amy
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Truly you depicted the damsel in distress….more so damsel in red
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We must take care of the kind people who love and care for us.Thank you for reading and the comment.
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You have captured and retold a lovely image. What beauty you must have found in her. A lucky lady, indeed.
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Thank you Audrey. Some memories get better with time.
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Wow… Awesome… You gotta read this… I wrote something similar… Give me your opinion on it…. Here’s the link…. http://pratheekreddy68.wordpress.com/2014/06/23/a-gape-out-of-ptolevs-window/
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Thank you for reading and I will check out your poem.
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