I adored you
I adored you
I loved you near and afar.
I loved your soft voice and beautiful face.
I stood near you and we held hands and shared drink.
We traveled California One and I watched your dance
on the quiet beaches.
We found private places where you laid bare and free.
I could see a woman I beloved in silence .
But my need for you.
You never felt.
Because I didn’t show you, who I was
All I wanted was you,
Near but far away.
Today I’m alone without you.
And you,
so far away from me.
Today my only wish,
is that I told you I adored you.
John Castellenas/Coyote
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“We found private places where you laid bare and free.”
Beautiful line 🙂
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I love the California coastline. This coming year. I will return to her and visit her again.
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Lovely John!
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Thank you Ms. Vee.
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My pleasure.😁
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So much love and longing encapsulated in these words. Beautiful.
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Thank you Annie for reading and the comment. I do appreciate.
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My pleasure, John. I enjoy them, you create wonderful pieces.
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Sensual and lovely 💕💜💃❄
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Thank you for reading and the comment. I do appreciate.
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Lovely!!!
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I’m reading a 40 year journal I wrote. I rewrote six poems and this is one. Thank you for reading and the comment.
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Always…
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